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Hi, I have a basic understanding of the English language. Please learn some grammar and sentence structure and come back and try posting again.
This is better:
Hi! I have a basic understanding of the English language, and I think you should use better grammar and sentence structure, then come back and post again.
He doesn't have to TRY to post, he can do that. You would also be speaking only for yourself and not the group as a whole.